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 == "Childhood" ==
-As a child when Shurian was still in the town of {{world:patiencia_banner.png?16}} [[World:Patiencia|Patiencia]].
+As a child when Shurian was still in the town of {{world:patiencia_banner.png?16}} [[World:Patiencia|Patiencia]],
-When they were still treated like one of the new "Antecedents" he was always rather bored how everybody just treated them like a protected child, trying to get them accustomed to the new world of Fiagia they were in.
+when they were still treated like one of the new "Antecedents", they were always rather bored by how everybody treated them like a protected child, trying to get them accustomed to the new world of Fiagia they were in.
-He learned basically all essentials and the first things he wanted to know was how to get out and make his life more interesting again, making it very easy on the day an important figure by the name [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] gave his area a visit.
+They learned all of the essentials and the first thing they wanted to know was how to get out and make their life more interesting again. This was made very easy on the day an important figure by the name [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] gave their area a visit.
-Shuri wanted to get into some sort of trouble or at least quench his boredom somehow, ending up in his first noteable action ever, running really quick past multiple fans, a big orange cat and they decked Kaiera in the face, causing quite the uproar in his area and suspension from his at the time antecedants class, suspension ending up permanent because the Bunny just didn't return.
+Shuri wanted to get into some sort of trouble or at least quench their boredom somehow, ending up in their first noteable action ever. They ran quickly past multiple fans, a big orange cat and others just to deck Kaiera in the face. This caused quite the uproar in their area and as a result, suspension from their at the time antecedants class. The suspension ending up permanent because the bunny just didn't care to return.
 == "What to do?" ==
-After Shuri's been suspended from his class they started to believe that he's just genuinely better than all the other antecedents and that they're all just whiny children with a thought of: "A new world isn't scary at all, this is a second chance, there's magic and everything and how am I wasting my time? Sitting in a class-room learning about geography and seemingly "important" things"
+After Shuri's suspension from their class they started to believe that they're just genuinely better than all the other antecedents. They would think that they're all just whiny children with the thought of: "A new world isn't scary at all, this is a second chance, there's magic and everything. Why would I waste my time sitting in a classroom learning about geography and seemingly "important" things?"
-So the bunny decided to make his suspencion into a expel, not returning to class and traveling towards the Continent of Auril to learn more about the actually only interesting thing in this world being, sorcia!
+So the bunny decided to make their suspension into an expel, not returning to class and traveling towards the Continent of Auril to learn more about the only interesting thing in this world. That being of course, sorcia!
-After multiple failed encounters because at the time he was still kind of a child and quite futile attempts of leaving for Auril because to his detriment he learned that they're floating islands.
+Shuri tried multiple encounters but failed because, at the time, they were still kind of a child. They learned much to their detriment that the continent of Auril were actually floating islands.
-So they ended up traveling to the Continent of :maahst: [[World:Maahst|Maahst]] where they met [[typyl:Luther Amarine|Luther Amarine]] and [[typyl:Nolsman|Nolsman]] in an attempt to be a stowaway in an airship because, Shurian as a child didn't really have any financial income, thanks to the mercy of those both they helped him get a proper travel ticket towards Auril and Shuri is ever so grateful to them, to the degree he didn't even forget them.
+So they ended up traveling to the Continent of :maahst: [[World:Maahst|Maahst]] where they met [[typyl:Luther Amarine|Luther Amarine]] and [[typyl:Nolsman|Nolsman]] in an attempt to be a stowaway in an airship. Shurian as a child didn't really have any financial income but thanks to the mercy of them both, they helped them get a proper travel ticket towards Auril. Shuri was ever so grateful to them that they decided they didn't even forget them, which sadly was a lot for the little troublemaker.
 == Auril ==
-As Shurian arrived in :auril: [[World:Auril|Auril]] they immediatly felt at home! Surprisingly, the entire "being on a floating island and everything being highly magical advanced" was kinda surreal, alone the fact that they still had to get used to calling "Magic" Sorcia from their memories as an antecedant should have made them feel like an outsider, but with the amount of things to experience here and everything new to see they felt like they found a place to belong all of a sudden!
+As Shurian arrived in :auril: [[World:Auril|Auril]] they immediatly felt at home!
+Surprisingly, the entire "being on a floating island and everything being highly magically advanced" was kinda surreal. let alone the fact that they still had to get used to calling “Magic” Sorcia. Their memories as an antecedent should have made them feel like an outsider, but with the amount of things to experience here and everything new to see, they felt like they found a place to belong all of a sudden!
-The following years Shuri would end up learning everything about Sorcia in the Academic City of Loripsom, they'd also relearn everything they essentially skipped over in Patienca in their own freetime even ending up becoming a Teacher, enjoying said profession for quite a while!
+The following years Shuri would end up learning everything about Sorcia in the Academic City of Loripsom. They'd also relearn everything they skipped over in Patienca in their own freetime. They even ended up becoming a Teacher, enjoying said profession for quite a while!
-After a while of being a teacher Shuri would end up teaching another Bunny that reminded them about themself while they were in {{world:patiencia_banner.png?16}} [[world:Patienca|Patience]], trying to hang out with them outside of classes because she intrigued their curiousity.
+After a while of being a teacher Shuri would end up teaching another Bunny that reminded them about themselves while they were in {{world:patiencia_banner.png?16}} [[world:Patienca|Patience]], trying to hang out with them outside of classes because she intrigued their curiosity.
-Two years later of teaching and general help around the continent :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]] their old boredom would kick in again, Shuri felt like they were finished in :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]], so they ended up giving the ownership of their house to the student they ended up creating a friendship with and began their travels again, this time as an adult who was now more knowledgeable about the world and sorcia. Making a promise to their new best friend that her "sister" would come back from time to time and she doesn't have to worry about them.
+Two years later of teaching and general help around the continent :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]] their old boredom would kick in again. Shuri felt like they were finished in :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]], so they ended up giving the ownership of their house to the student they ended up creating a friendship with. They would begin their travels again, this time as an adult who was now more knowledgeable about the world and sorcia. They would Make a promise to their new best friend that her "sister" would come back from time to time and she wouldn't have to worry about them.
 == Adventuring ==
-As Shuri left :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]] they surprisingly knew immediatly what to do and actually signed up as an adventurer so they'd get to see more of the world!
+As Shuri left :auril: [[world:Auril|Auril]] they surprisingly knew immediately what to do and actually signed up as an adventurer so they'd get to see more of the world!
-Shuri ended up becoming one of the more in their view competent adventurers, but that entire business also just kept their interest for at best half a year, having met [[oc:Yuivee|Yuivee]] as a fellow adventurer who had quite the issue finding a fellow adventurer and Shuri ended up taking them just for the fact of "A tank and a DPS work well together" was already a good enough experience in their book and so they just went on to their own adventures afterwards.
+Shuri ended up becoming one of the more, in their view, competent adventurers, but doing so also kept their interest for at best half a year. Having met [[oc:Yuivee|Yuivee]] as a fellow adventurer who had quite the issue finding a fellow adventurer, Shuri ended up taking them. The fact of "A tank and a DPS work well together" was already a good enough combo in their book.
+They ended up going separate ways after half a year.
 == "Boredom" ==
-After having been a teacher, an adventurer and having studied everything they wanted to, Shuri met a wall, they were already bored of the new world they were in after just a mere 3 years.
+After having been a teacher, an adventurer and having studied everything they wanted to, Shuri met a wall. They were already bored of the new world they were in after just a mere 3 years.
-Shuri ended up going around the world, causing mayhem, helping people meeting old acquaintances, even challenging [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] multiple times to proof how much better they'd gotten, Shuri was surprisingly happy that the cat even still remembered that little bunny punching them when they were still in class.
+Shuri ended up going around the world, causing mayhem, helping people meeting old acquaintances, even challenging [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] multiple times to proof how much better they'd gotten. Shuri was surprisingly happy that the cat even still remembered that little bunny punching them when they were still in class.
-Ending up becoming Kaiera's actual rival what made him sutpidly happy on the inside, but even that didn't keep his interest going for long.
+They ended up becoming Kaiera's actual rival and that made him stupidly happy on the inside, but even that didn't keep his interest going for long.
-They would occassionally return to people they'd know but Shuri was lost, thanking the people that got them an airship, lasted for only a day.
+They would occasionally return to people they'd know but Shuri was lost. Thanking the people that got them an airship, lasted for only a day.
 Keeping [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera]] in shape, lasted for a month at a time.
-Visiting their sister? Was only interesting as long as he had stories to tell her and to see how she grew up.
+Visiting their sister? Was only interesting as long as they had stories to tell her and to see how she grew up.
 Literally challenging Savs? Was a fun challenge once.
-Shuri was stuck, ending up as a traveler, in a weird quest of "trying to find the newest interesting thing" never actually finding it.
+Shuri was stuck, ending up as a traveler, in a weird quest of "trying to find the newest interesting thing" and never actually finding it.
 == "Master" ==
-Shuri having studied everything interesting and no particular ways to improve themselves further, ended up... kinda depressed, they would actually lay down in nature for multiple weeks not knowing what to do, it kind of felt... nice just being in the silent nature of Fiagia by themself.
+Shuri, having studied everything interesting to them and feeling there was no particular ways to improve themselves further, they ended up... kinda depressed. They would actually lay down in nature for multiple weeks not knowing what to do, it kind of felt... nice just being in the silent nature of Fiagia by themselves.
-That ended up causing a weird... feeling inside of them, they tried to accept that new feeling but Shuri had no clue what it was, so everything just felt off.
+That ended up causing a weird... feeling inside of them, the little bunny wasn't able to particularly pinpoint the new sensation in their body. They ended up shrugging it off, the feeling wasn't "bad" it was just weird.
-The next time Shurian ended up challenging [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera]] again they'd finally realize what felt off, shuri was way more potent, felt different, lighter and just not like a typyl anymore.
+The next time Shurian ended up challenging [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera]] Shuri felt way more potent. They felt  different, lighter and just not like a typyl anymore.
-Something new interesting to explore! Even a sickness is interesting they guessed! But it wouldn't take long for Shurian and Kaiera to figure out that Shuri's entire biology changed, they seemed more like a walking Aspect than an actual typyl nowadays.
+Something new and interesting to explore! Even a sickness is interesting they guessed! But it wouldn't take long for Shurian and Kaiera to figure out that Shuri's entire biology changed. They seemed more like a walking Aspect than an actual typyl nowadays.
-With that discovery [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera]] ended up declaring an official new class and Shurian was allowed to name it because what he was "suffering" from was something never seen before, Shurian ended up calling the class "[[class:Elemaia|Elemaia]]" because of the close relation to the "Elements" of the Aspects they felt and was from then on declared the Master of the Typyl Class [[class:Elemaia|Elemaia]].
+With that discovery [[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera]] ended up declaring an official new class and Shurian was allowed to name it because what they were "suffering" from was something never seen before. Shurian ended up calling the class "[[class:Elemaia|Elemaia]]" because of the close relation to the "Elements" of the Aspects they felt. From then on, Shuri was declared the Master of the Typyl Class [[class:Elemaia|Elemaia]].
 == Epilogue ==
-Declared Master, getting a sister, having adventured, even becoming a teacher and challenging Savs and important figures, Shuri has reached a point of "I've done everything there is to do isn't there?"
+Declared Master, getting a sister, having adventured, becoming a teacher, challenging Savs and important figures, Shuri reached a point of "I've done everything there is to do isn't there?"
-Their story is far from over, they still travel the world in the hopes to find something interesting again one day, appearing in random photos as they runs past them as a white/grey flash, sometimes being spotted alone in nature and sometimes being the reason behind some collatoral damage.
+Their story is far from over. They still travel the world in the hopes to find something interesting again one day. They'll appear in random photos as they run past as a white/grey flash, sometimes being spotted alone in nature and sometimes being the reason behind some collatoral damage.
 The hardest to find Master Class Typyl in the world is still around and probably doing something they have never done before.
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 Shurian is really fast at learning and basically uses that to adapt to any situation, not as good as someone who’s done it for years, but they get the basics down real easily. Thanks to that you'll find them in the strangest places to learn new stuff, never really staying in one spot.
-They're a rather fast thinker, making them quite adept with magic only hindered by a little bit of an electricity bias. They produce yellow electricity to compliment their general colour scheme, making others assume he can change his lightning to any colour he pleases.
+They're a rather fast thinker, making them quite adept with magic only hindered by a little bit of an electricity bias. They produce yellow electricity to compliment their general colour scheme, making others assume they can change his lightning to any colour they please.
 In terms of combat Shurian likes to dominate their opponent with fast and strong attacks while trying to avoid getting hit at all cost, because of their small stature they can't really take that many hits, often jumping and running around on the battlefield as fast as lightning.
+== Ghost of Electrica ==
+Despite learning with Kaiera that all the Sorcia potency from Shuri has increased, they would not figure out the true potential of their newfound powers till Shuri got pushed to the brink.
+Assuming they'd lost their first battle in many years, the young master didn't pass out. Their skin ended up burning off and falling off, just for them to notice, that they turned into pure energy on the inside as they slowly got back up again.
+In this state a master of the elemaia class would end up dropping their "mortal" coil and turn into the purest form of sorcia a typyl could revert to.
+This would give them a short burst of energy in one specific aspect that they were attuned to the closest. For specifically Shurian it would be the Aspect of :electrica: causing a burst of power in said element and other benefits like a spectral form, enhanced speed and the power of flight.
+If the ability is trained it can be formed more freely over time.
+After the typyl has used up their sorcia to keep the form up, the body would create a new shell as a last measure, leaving the body of the typyl behind with barely enough sorcia to keep them alive.
+Shurian ended up naming the state "A Ghost" as they felt like they would have been literally spectral if someone would have tried to grab them the first time they were in it. This would lead to the further naming of "Ghost of [Insert Aspect]".
 ===== Relationships =====
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 === Kaiera L'Heart ===
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-[[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] is one of the first people Shurian has found in the new world, even going as far as punching him to get his attention on their first meeting, left quite the impression!
+[[typyl:Kaiera L'Heart|Kaiera L'Heart]] is one of the first people Shurian found in the new world, even going as far as punching him to get his attention on their first meeting. It left quite the impression!
-Shurian is Kaiera's self-declared rival because they both excel at near every same aspects and he looked very important making Shuri's competetive nature go ham. Ending up as the constant nuisance in Kaiera's life to "keep up with their standards" Trying to keep him up to shape and make him improve everytime they meet.
+Shurian is Kaiera's self-declared rival because they both excel at nearly the same aspects, Kaiera looked very important making Shuri's competitive nature go ham. They would end up as the constant nuisance in Kaiera's life to "keep up with their standards." Trying to keep him up to shape and make him improve every time they meet.
 Because of that Shuri believes Kaiera to be one of the only competent typyl in the entire world of fiagia.

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