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revoblam Adding names of the town ([[user:revoblam:Solinaris]])
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 Kyben Alchemarke is an unofficial character written for Furria. Kyben Alchemarke is an unofficial character written for Furria.
  
-Kyben lives in the town of [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]] in [[Welsiris]], doing mostly guild work and helping his friends.+Kyben lives in the town of [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]] in [[Welisris]], doing mostly guild work and helping his friends.
  
-He owns a sub guild he calls “[[culture:black fang gang|The Black Fang Gang]]”, He is friends with all of its members, as any Gleader should...+He owns a sub guild that he calls “[[culture:black fang gang|The Black Fang Gang]]”, He is friends with all of its members, as any leader should...
  
 === Additional Info === === Additional Info ===
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   * **Age:** 22   * **Age:** 22
   * **Title:** The Crystal Buster   * **Title:** The Crystal Buster
-  * **Hometown:** [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]], [[Welsiris]]+  * **Hometown:** [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]], [[Welisris]]
  
   * **Moral Alignment:** Lawful Good   * **Moral Alignment:** Lawful Good
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 As the leading headpin of the [[culture:black fang gang|BFG]] (Black Fang Gang) Kyben deals with picking out tasks to distribute between the Sub-Guild members, doing paperwork and a slew of other work.  As the leading headpin of the [[culture:black fang gang|BFG]] (Black Fang Gang) Kyben deals with picking out tasks to distribute between the Sub-Guild members, doing paperwork and a slew of other work. 
  
-It doesn’t stop him from having a few hobbies in the little free time he gets, particularly sculpting, which has helped him a few times.+It doesn’t stop him from having a few hobbies in the little free time he gets, particularly sculpting.
  
 ==== Personality ==== ==== Personality ====
-Kyben Is a person who normally shoots first and thinks later, and it shows primarily in how he talks, he tends to point at the things many would rather dance around and he could sometimes be interpreted as being rude when he is only trying to.+Kyben is a person who normally shoots first and thinks later, and it shows primarily in how he talks. He tends to point at the things many would rather dance around and he could sometimes be interpreted as being rude when he is only trying to help.
  
 This doesn’t mean he is dim-witted, In fact his capability to run the BFG doesn’t leave much to be desired, he knows how to measure the abilities of other individuals and always tries to get those he thinks could help his sub-guild by trying to know them. This doesn’t mean he is dim-witted, In fact his capability to run the BFG doesn’t leave much to be desired, he knows how to measure the abilities of other individuals and always tries to get those he thinks could help his sub-guild by trying to know them.
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 ==== History ==== ==== History ====
-Ever since childhood, Kyben was two things: A hot-headed Typyl and a kid with a heart of gold, The kind to fight tooth and nail against people that far surpassed him, he particularly wanted to learn how to use blunt weapons and shields to more easily beat people up, after all, a stick could be found anywhere. +Ever since childhood, Kyben was two things: A hot-headed Typyl and a kid with a heart of gold, The kind to fight tooth and nail against people that far surpassed him, he particularly wanted to learn how to use blunt weapons and shields to more easily beat people up. //"After all, a stick could be found anywhere."// 
  
-When he reached adulthood, he and a few campus friends formed a Team to take missions in their hometown, eventually they met more people who shared their idea of helping not only their town but the whole continent. Eventually causing Kyben to file the creation of a Sub-Guild which he named the Black Fang Gangs.+When he reached adulthood, he and a few campus friends formed a team to take missions in their hometown. Eventually they met more people who shared the idea of helping not only their town but the whole continent. This caused Kyben to file the creation of a Sub-Guild in which he named the Black Fang Gangs.
  
 He would eventually cross tales with Onze, pestering him incessantly about joining the Black Fang Gangs He would eventually cross tales with Onze, pestering him incessantly about joining the Black Fang Gangs
  
 ===== Skills ===== ===== Skills =====
-Kyben is proficient in Melee Combat with Maces and Shields, often combining both to become a stalwart wall. Moreover he is capable of using some sorcia to mix up his repertoire.+Kyben is proficient in Melee Combat with Maces and Shields, often combining both to become a stalwart wall. He is capable of using some sorcia as well to mix up his repertoire.
  
 === Crystal Manipulation === === Crystal Manipulation ===
-Kyben holds knowledge about crystals, by which he always corrects anyone asking as “Gemcraft.” while in combat it would be pretty useless, he shows he wisdom in a dangerous way: the ability to bring forth chunks of precious gems out of the very soil itself through a combination of Solum and Vello, at most he can use it to create needle-sized projectiles but if he really puts all his Force into it, he would be able to create bigger projectiles.+Kyben holds knowledge about crystals, by which he always corrects anyone who calls it “Gemcraft.” While in combat it would be pretty useless, he shows his wisdom in a dangerous way: the ability to bring forth chunks of precious gems out of the very soil itself through a combination of Solum and Vello. At most he can use it to create needle-sized projectiles but if he puts all his Force into it, he'll be able to create bigger projectiles.
  
 === SHATTER CHARGE: Blood Drive === === SHATTER CHARGE: Blood Drive ===
 Kyben’s Shatter Charge is the ability to drive himself into a frenzy through the visage of “blood”. This gives his stats a high enough boost to change his combat style slightly, particularly his speed. The major downside is his inability to differentiate the enemy from foe, and the fact that his Force depletes at a massive rate, leaving him rather close to whiting out... Kyben’s Shatter Charge is the ability to drive himself into a frenzy through the visage of “blood”. This gives his stats a high enough boost to change his combat style slightly, particularly his speed. The major downside is his inability to differentiate the enemy from foe, and the fact that his Force depletes at a massive rate, leaving him rather close to whiting out...
  
-...Mayhaps it should be called a Shatter Break instead? What even is blood to a Typyl, anyways?? 
  
 ===== Relationships ===== ===== Relationships =====
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 === Arkaine Estheney === === Arkaine Estheney ===
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-Kyben and **[[typyl:Arkaine Estheney]]** apparently go a long way back, from what he lets out about herShe is the BFG’s “Long-Distance Intel Specialist” gathering info from places she visitsHe seems to get a bit annoyed at her “Kyben’s my Nemesis!” Charade.... But he likes testing out how good he is at fighting her magic onslaughts (And “Beating some sense into her, literally” as he says). He doesn’t let out anything about Ark’s past though, honoring her wishes about that issue. And Contrary to common belief, they can spend time together not fighting every so often.+Kyben and **[[typyl:Arkaine Estheney]]** apparently go a long way back, from what he lets out about herShe is the BFG’s “Long-Distance Intel Specialist” gathering info from places she visitsHe seems to get a bit annoyed at her “Kyben’s my Nemesis!” Charade.... But he likes testing out how good he is at fighting her magic onslaughts (And “Beating some sense into her, literally” as he says). He doesn’t let out anything about Ark’s past though, honoring her wishes about that issue. And contrary to common belief, they can spend time together not fighting every so often.
  
 **• Compatibility:** ★★★★☆  **• Compatibility:** ★★★★☆ 
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 === Onze Dokva === === Onze Dokva ===
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-Kyben found **[[typyl:Onze Dokva]]** outside [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]] and after a tense situation, he figured that the guy was just in the wrong place in the wrong time.However, he can’t shake a few things about him, namely the fact that he had a house in [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]], but no recollection of ever living there… In a way, he is keeping his eyes on him, but he still believes him to be trustworthy enough to be a part of the Black Fang Gang.+Kyben found **[[typyl:Onze Dokva]]** outside [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]] and after a tense situation, he figured that the guy was just in the wrong place in the wrong time. However, he can’t shake a few things about him, namely the fact that he had a house in [[user:revoblam:Solinaris]], but no recollection of ever living thereIn a way, he'keeping his eyes on him, but he still believes him to be trustworthy enough to be a part of the Black Fang Gang.
  
 **• Compatibility:** ★★★☆☆  **• Compatibility:** ★★★☆☆ 
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