typyl:puriru_girino

Differences

This shows you the differences between two versions of the page.

--- typyl:puriru_girino [2017/02/15 01:44]
fiakaiera
+++ typyl:puriru_girino [2017/08/21 16:04] (current)
@@ Line 27: / Line 27: @@
 ===== About =====
-Puriru is one of the participants that underwent [[furria:human transferrence]] through an incident relating to the [[furria:Hidden Anthropomorphic Compound]] project, unwillingly contributing to the incident that leads to the event relating to the Presav.
+Puriru is one of the participants that underwent [[furria:human transference]] through an incident relating to the [[furria:Hidden Anthropomorphic Compound]] project, unwillingly contributing to the [[furria:the saviand anomaly|The Saviand Anomaly]].
 In the HAC, she is one the caretakers of the group, acting as the doctor.
@@ Line 33: / Line 33: @@
 ==== Personality ====
 === As Human ===
-Puriru(who was not named as such before) is a small-time bully victim who doesn't really get bothered by being bullied. Overtime, being bullied starts to become a problem overtime in which to the point her twin brother [[typyl:Tamiru Girino]] saving her at different times.
+Puriru(who was not named as such before) is a small-time bully victim who doesn't really get bothered by being bullied. Over time however, being bullied starts to become a problem to the point where her twin brother [[typyl:Tamiru Girino]] is saving her at different times.
 Outside of this, she is a nice person who anyone can easily get along and talk with. She goes along with a small group of friends and works hard to study well to satisfy herself and her parents.
@@ Line 45: / Line 45: @@
 ===== Reason in the H.A.C. =====
-Puriru wanted to participate in the [[furria:H.A.C.]] to get away from her life from Earth, though being acceptable enough for her to live in despite the bullies. When confronted in the stall of the HAC, she instinctively accepted a key for it without hesitation.
+Puriru wanted to participate in the [[furria:H.A.C.|HAC]] to get away from her life from Earth, though being acceptable enough for her to live in despite the bullies. When confronted in the stall of the HAC, she instinctively accepted a key for it without hesitation.
-Despite her friends a bit worried with her leaving, Puriru does not want to return the key despite not knowing the rule that you cannot return the key. She tells her friends that do not worry about her as she will be fine urging her friends that life will be a lot easier, especially with bullies not going after her and bothering the group afterwards.
+Despite her friends a bit worried with her leaving, Puriru does not want to return the key despite not knowing the rule that you cannot return the key at all. She tells her friends to not worry about her as she will be fine, prompting and reminding them that life will be a lot easier, especially with bullies not going after her and bothering the group afterwards.
-Puriru positiviely looks at the HAC, wondering what living in the HAC is like, in which in turn was worth it for her and more grateful to find Tamiru tagging alongside with her on the night of the transport to the HAC.
+Puriru positively looks at the HAC, wondering what living in the HAC is like, in which in turn was worth it for her and more grateful to find Tamiru tagging alongside with her on the night of the transport to the HAC.
 ===== Trivia =====
@@ Line 65: / Line 65: @@
 {{tag>"Typyl"
-"typyl:Transferrence Typyl"
+"typyl:Transference Typyl"
 "typyl:Deceased Typyl"
 "typyl:Tadpole-type Typyl"

Last modified: 2017-02-15 @ 11:44:20 (11 AM) by